1: The left hand is bugging me a bit... maybe try that arm back to make him more balanced, that will put more focus on the face and the flowers.
2: Try some different poses from straight on.
3:The guy in the airs left foot needs to be turned in right now the Silhouette is off, with his shoulders turned in the image loses a bit of the power in his movement. The other guy if you turn the model to the right you will get a better Silhouette
I love the style the render can use some tweaking. However using 3d models is a good idea SOOO easy to make changes!!! Sorry couldnt fit it all in one.....Comments need to be longer ;)
Zhag said on Sep 02, 2009:
Not bad so far, though your middle page needs to be rotated ninety degrees clockwise to be more readable.
JennLulu said on Sep 24, 2009:
1: The left hand is bugging me a bit... maybe try that arm back to make him more balanced, that will put more focus on the face and the flowers.
2: Try some different poses from straight on.
JennLulu said on Sep 24, 2009:
3:The guy in the airs left foot needs to be turned in right now the Silhouette is off, with his shoulders turned in the image loses a bit of the power in his movement. The other guy if you turn the model to the right you will get a better Silhouette
JennLulu said on Sep 24, 2009:
I love the style the render can use some tweaking. However using 3d models is a good idea SOOO easy to make changes!!! Sorry couldnt fit it all in one.....Comments need to be longer ;)