Incandescent Girl: Vol. 1
by llamatamer
Summary
Alice is an orphan due to a fire her parents died in. When Alice turns fifteen her long lost aunt, Mari, adopts her. Alice also possesses a very powerful magic - the magic of flame. Alice believes that this uncontrollable power caused the fire in which her parents died. Alice must now learn to control her powers and use them for good. Will she handle her powers or succumb to them and the dark forces around her?
SaraDivjak said on Sep 14, 2010:
I like how you use high contrast crosshatching to achieve dark atmosphere. I would just suggest using one font for all the pages and centering that font a bit neater inside the text boxes. Just a small change that would make a big difference. : )